Tag: Jean-Luc Picard

  • The Buried Age

    Star Trek: The Next Generation: The Buried Age by Christopher L. Bennett

    Published June 27, 2007 by Pocket Books

    Summary

    The Buried Age covers the period of time in Picard’s life leading up to the first mission of the Enterprise-D.  Following the loss of the Stargazer, Picard, believing that his future in Starfleet is in doubt, focuses on archaeology and begins an exploration of a buried age of the ancient galactic history.

    Let the Gripes Begin

    The premise is intriguing.  Otherwise I wouldn’t have picked the book up.  Picard isn’t exactly an open book, so having the opportunity to learn about his past prior to the Enterprise was something I just couldn’t pass up.  But a book needs more than a good premise to be successful, and this one has some problems that keep it from being great.

    First of all, the book is slow!  At least in the beginning, it is.  There’s very little action to drive the book along, and I’ve come to appreciate a fair amount of action in Trek books. It’s something I’ve become accustomed to, and while it’s not necessary for the book to be all action, there needs to be some.  If I recall correctly, this is a gripe that fans had during the first season of TNG – too much talk, not enough action, so we’ve seen this situation before.  With the show, it could be attributed to the fact that fans were comparing Picard and Kirk.  It took time for them to get used to the fact that the two men are very different captains and have very different methods of resolving problems.  Picard prefers a more diplomatic approach, while Kirk is the kind of captain who shoots first and asks questions later. Picard is the focus of the book, so I guess I shouldn’t be surprised there isn’t a ton of action.  Picard isn’t a cowboy.

    Tech Speak!

    The writing also has a tendency to get very technical, and I often found myself lost in all the science talk – it’s very difficult to follow at times. I get it – Trek is science fiction, so there are supposed to be technical bits.  After all, it wouldn’t do to have Trek devolve into space opera.  But I don’t understand why Bennett spends so much time having characters explain intricate technical phenomena, especially while glossing over the action bits. Every once in a while – okay, I can deal with that, but it seems like it happens so often in this book. I found myself skimming over those parts because they’re just too much.  Those passages are difficult to follow, and I question just how relevant they are to the overall plot.  I realize that some readers probably love all the tech details, and that’s totally cool.  But I’m not one of those readers.  The action is what I want to read!  My eyes glaze over when I have to read a page-long explanation of some technological process I’m not interested in.  Ugh!  It plays a big role in ruining this book for me.  There is just way too much tech speak!

    (Spoiler Alert!  Don’t read past this point if you don’t want to know what happens.)

    I’d approached this book thinking I would be reading about my favorite characters.  After about the first ten chapters, the only familiar faces and names I’d encountered were Picard and Guinan, and even then, Guinan only appears for a few pages.  I almost gave up, but then Kathryn Janeway pops up unexpectedly at the end of Chapter 9.  Her appearance was the only thing that kept me reading.  Curiosity about how the plot would be resolved wasn’t even enough to keep me interested.  Combine that with the slow pace and the lack of canon characters, and you’ve got one dull read.  Maybe I should have somehow known what I was getting into when I bought the book, but I guess I thought learning more about Picard’s history would be more interesting.  Luckily for me, things eventually did get more interesting.  One reason is because more familiar faces, like Janeway, appear.  After this, the plot seemed to pick up some steam.

    Sabotage

    Bennett somehow managed to sabotage my enjoyment of the action that eventually did appear in the book, though.  How?  By rushing through scenes.  I know that he does it to move the plot along, and it’s necessary at times because the book covers such a large swath of time, but Bennett also does it when it would be better to let the action play out, such as when Ariel freaks out in the city.  That scene would have been great if Bennett had been more active in his portrayal.  Instead, he provides a passive account.  One of the things that makes great books great is their ability to pull you into the story so that you feel like you’re sitting there watching the action from a front-row seat or even standing in the middle of the action.  The way Bennett writes, you feel as if you’re only getting a re-cap.  It’s just not engaging.

    Lessons

    So it turns out that Ariel double-crosses Picard.  I can’t say that I didn’t suspect that this might end up being the case, just from the summary on the back cover.  But there were other clues throughout the plot, too, such as Picard’s uncharacteristic behavior in letting Ariel’s desires influence his actions so much, especially after he returns to Starfleet.  On the other hand, for all we know, that may not be so uncharacteristic for Picard at this point in his life, given that we don’t really know much about Picard’s personality from before his time as the Enterprise’s captain.  The only significant clues I’ve ever learned about his pre-Enterprise personality were gleaned when we saw his brashness as an Academy cadet in the TNG episode “Tapestry”, which depicted how Picard ended up with an artificial heart.

    Part IV is the best part of the book for me.  The action and flow of the plot in this part is more in line with what I’d expect of a Trek book, plus we get to see how Picard chose more members of his command crew for the Enterprise.  Good stuff!  This part of the book actually makes me want to watch TNG’s season 1.  That’s saying a lot because Season 1 of TNG is probably my least favorite season in all Trekdom, no joke.

    In addition to being plain old good, the final chapters also bring together some important themes of the book, namely guilt and the toll it can take on an individual; and the ability to let go of the past, live for the present, and welcome the adventure of the future.  The latter theme is what hit home for me the most, as it’s something I’ve find myself struggling with often.  Picard tells Ariel that she shouldn’t mourn the past.  She should view the unknown as an adventure.  Moving on in life is difficult, but you can’t remain somewhere that seems comfortable if it’s obvious that you’ve outgrown it, as Ariel has outgrown the corporeal plane of existence.  Don’t look at the past in terms of what you’ve lost – look at the future with excitement over what new things you’ll experience and the new people you’ll meet.

    The guilt thread is relevant to me, too, because I do have a tendency to feel guilty about failures, as Picard does.  What Deanna tells Picard about his history of success – it almost sounds like she could be speaking directly to me.  Like Picard, success has often come so easily to me that I expect it.  Failure has been something that I’ve viewed as unacceptable, something that needs to be fixed.  But that isn’t always possible or even desirable, and you mustn’t allow yourself to become obsessed by it.

    The Buried Age begins slowly, but it eventually picks up steam and becomes an interesting read in the later chapters.  It unexpectedly touched on some issues that I’ve been trying to deal with in my life, which has been rare for me when it comes to Trek books, though I know it’s not at all uncommon for that to happen.  I don’t think I can go so far as to call the book great, but it’s a solid good.

  • Sweetest Sin – Chapter 1. Surveying the Damage

    Story #6 in the “More than a Lifetime” series

    Author’s Note: This story is the sixth in a series of stories that do not follow cannon and should not be taken as such. The previous stories, in order, are: 1) Delta Wild, 2) Homecoming, 3) Graduation, 4) A Love Less Ordinary, and 5) Return to Normal. The events in these stories occur in an alternate universe in which Chakotay’s stint with the Maquis happened much earlier in his life. He is married to Kathryn Janeway, and they have a daughter. In this universe, Voyager did not combine with a crew from a Maquis ship, but instead reached the Delta Quadrant with a small loss of life and most of her crew in tact. The events of “First Contact” and “Insurrection” have already occurred in this timeline, but “Nemesis” has not. The Dominion War occurred, but with vastly different results. Many of the events of the final season of Deep Space Nine didn’t occur, which means the characters that died during the season are not dead in my story. Please overlook any other inconsistencies or errors pertaining to the original Star Trek universe as the author’s ignorance.

    1. SURVEYING THE DAMAGE

    Jean-Luc Picard looked at each of the faces of the Enterprise E’s senior crew, seated around the large conference table in the observation lounge. He hated meetings of this nature, but it was necessary that they be informed of the bittersweet results of their most recent mission. They all knew that Federation Ambassador Hea Starr had been successfully rescued from a labor camp on Cardassia Prime. They also knew that both Will Riker and Danielle Janeway had gone to Prime to rescue Starr and that Janeway hadn’t returned to the Enterprise with Riker and Starr.

    “As I’m sure you’re all aware of by now, Lt. Janeway did not return to the ship with Commander Riker and the ambassador. I have been informed that she is being held on Cardassia Prime as a prisoner of the Cardassian state,” Picard said, simply stating what was already known by his senior staff. “Now we’ve got to try to find a way to get her back.”

    Will Riker looked down at the table. She doesn’t want to come back, he thought.

    Picard continued. “I’ve been in contact with Command, and they are in the process of -“

    The captain was interrupted by the sound of the observation lounge doors swishing open. He swiveled around to see who had just joined his meeting – late. Ambassador Hea Starr made his way to an empty seat at the table.

    “I apologize, Captain. I didn’t mean to interrupt you,” Starr said, settling in at the table. “Please – continue.”

    “Ambassador – good of you to join us,” Picard said. “I’m pleased to see you are in good health.”

    “All thanks to your skilled officers and medical staff,” Starr replied with a smile. He was a handsome, middle-aged human with warm, dark eyes and wavy salt-and-pepper hair. “If not for them, I wouldn’t be here right now. Chances are, I probably wouldn’t even be alive.” Starr had escaped from Prime with Riker nearly three days earlier, and had been on board the Enterprise for nearly twelve hours.

    “Yes,” Picard began again, “actually, one of my officers is the purpose of this staff meeting.”

    Starr’s smile faded. “Lt. Janeway,” he said sadly.

    “I was just telling my crew how headquarters has initiated negotiationtalks with the Cardassians in hopes of freeing Lt. Janeway,” Picard said. “It is our hope that the treaty we signed with them at the end of the Dominion War will play to our favor.”

    Starr nodded. “She is the reason that I am in attendance at this meeting,” he revealed. “I didn’t want the opportunity to tell everyone what kind of officer the lieutenant is to pass. She wasn’t forcibly taken by the Cardassians.”

    Will’s head shot up in the ambassador’s direction. He had been dreading the moment when he’d have to reveal to the captain, to everyone, what Dani had done. She’d abandoned the Federation and Starfleet for Dukat. So far, he hadn’t been able to bring himself to offer that information up to anyone. He hadn’t been planning to unless he was ordered to. But it looked like Starr was about to spill the beans right now. When Will had made his decision to keep to himself as long as possible, he’d forgotten that the ambassador had been standing right there when Dani had done it. He’d watched on as Dani had thrown away her Starfleet life.

    His heart sinking to the pit of his stomach, he watched and listened as Starr continued.

    At Starr’s last words, everyone at the table had looked at each other, obviously puzzled.

    “Ambassador, what do you mean she wasn’t taken forcibly,” Geordi asked. “You don’t mean she wanted to go with them?”

    “Oh, yes, Commander, that’s exactly what I’m saying,” Starr said. “Lt. Janeway went with the Cardassians willingly because she wanted to make sure they released me. She offered herself as a bargaining chip. I saw her do it before my very eyes. She offered herself to them for my freedom.”

    Will looked at the ambassador, surprised. He had not been expecting that to be the description of what had transpired on Cardassia. Starr had apparently seen Dani’s decision as a heroic notion.

    The Enterprise’s first officer thought about Dani and her situation. Perhaps, he thought, it had looked like Dani had turned herself over to the Cardassians in exchange for Starr’s life. Suddenly, there was a bright spot in all of this darkness for Will. If, somehow, they were able to get Dani back, her career might not necessarily be over. In his heart and mind, though, Will knew the ambassador’s version of what had happened wasn’t accurate. Concurring with Starr’s story would mean knowingly lying to the captain, Nechayev, and all of Starfleet. Could he do it?

    Meanwhile, the meeting had been continuing, Will oblivious to what had transpired in the minutes since Hea Starr had given his account of what had happened at the prison.

    “Starfleet has commenced negotiations with the Cardassians for the return of Lt. Janeway,” Picard was saying. “At the moment, those are the only actions being taken. However, it has been made very clear that if negotiations are not successful, other measures will have to be taken.” The meeting’s attendees all looked at one another, understanding the implications of the captain’s words. They would have to attempt another rescue mission if the talks failed.

    “By my projections, it is highly unlikely that the talks will be successful,” Data said. “We must remember that Starfleet is at fault in this situation for breaking into a Cardassian prison and aiding the escape of a prisoner of the Cardassian state. And it appears that we may have no choice but to repeat our infraction.”

    No one liked that prospect, but it looked like the most likely option would be what Data had suggested.

    Picard nodded. “That’s all the information I have for you at the moment,” he concluded. “You are dismissed.”

    Everyone at the table rose and began to file out of the lounge. “Number One?” Picard said. Will, who’d been on his way out of the room, turned to face his captain. “Sir?” he said.

    “Will,” Picard said, approaching his first officer. “I realize that this entire ordeal must be very difficult for you.”

    Will sighed. “I won’t lie to you. It certainly hasn’t been a picnic.”

    “Well, I assure you – we’re doing everything we can to bring Dani home. You have my word that I will do everything in my power to make sure that Dani is returned safe and healthy.”

    “Thank you, sir,” Will said. “I appreciate that.”

    Picard hesitated a moment before continuing. He knew Will wouldn’t like what he was going to say next. “In the meantime, I think it would be best if I took you off this mission.”

    “Sir -” Will objected.

    “Will, you’re much too close to this one,” Picard explained. “Take some time off. Get your head together.”

    “Sir, I appreciate the gesture,” Will began, “but I’d prefer to remain involved with this.”

    “Will, I understand what you’re going through. I really do.”

    “Then, you’ll understand my desire to want to do something, to feel useful. Frankly, sir, the only way you’re going to get me off this mission is to order me off it.”

    Picard studied Riker. He certainly didn’t want to pull the younger man off this mission. He truly did understand that the woman Will loved was being held captive. The man wanted to do whatever he could to make sure she returned home again.

    Picard nodded. “Very well, then. You shall remain a part of this mission. But Will, if you, at any time, feel that you no longer wish to remain involved, please don’t hesitate to inform me.”

    Will nodded. “Aye, sir.” With that, he left the observation lounge.

    When Will entered the turbolift, Deanna Troi followed him right in. “Deck 8,” Will said. The lift obediently began to move.

    Will knew why Deanna was here, and he wanted to tell her that he didn’t need to talk to anyone, but he knew that wasn’t the case. He needed to talk. Desperately. And there was no better person to talk to than the woman standing next to him. He looked down at her.

    “I don’t even know where to begin,” Will said. He and Deanna were both on the sofa in Will’s quarters. “I don’t know how to begin.”

    “Let’s begin with you,” Deanna suggested.

    “I feel absolutely horrible, Deanna,” Will expressed. “I should have never let them give her this assignment. I should have never let her agree to this assignment.” Will paused and reconsidered. “I know it wasn’t exactly her choice, though. I know it was an order, but I should have … done something.”

    “So, you feel responsible for Dani’s presence on Cardassia right now,” Deanna surmised.

    “Yes,” Will said honestly. His thoughts wandered back to those final moments on Cardassia when he’d watched Dani choose Dukat over him. That had hurt like a knife. “Maybe,” he continued, lost in his thoughts, forgetting that Troi was sitting beside him, “Maybe if I’d done something, anything … she’d be here right now.”

    “You’re right,” Deanna told him. “Dani didn’t have any control over this assignment, and neither did you. Will, this isn’t your fault. You obviously did everything you could to ensure Dani’s safety.”

    No, I didn’t, Will thought. If that were the case, he’d have shot Dukat when he’d had the chance, grabbed Dani, and gotten the hell out of there.